lunes, 13 de octubre de 2014

Del guión narrativo al guión técnico

PERROS DE RESERVA

 NICE GUY EDDIE
                Okay, everybody cough up green for
                the little lady.

       Everybody whips out a buck, and throws it on the table.
       Everybody, that is, except Mr. White.

                              NICE GUY EDDIE
                 C'mon, throw in a buck.

                              MR. WHITE
                 Uh-uh.  I don't tip.

                              NICE GUY EDDIE
                 Whaddaya mean you don't tip?

                              MR. WHITE
                 I don't believe in it.

                              NICE GUY EDDIE
                 You don't believe in tipping?

                              MR. PINK
                         (laughing)
                 I love this kid, he's a madman,
                 this guy.

                              MR. BLONDE
                 Do you have any idea what these
                 ladies make?  They make shit.

                              MR. WHITE
                 Don't give me that.  She don't
                 make enough money, she can quit.

       Everybody laughs.

                              NICE GUY EDDIE
                 I don't even know a Jew who'd have
                 the balls to say that.  So let's
                 get this straight. You never ever
                 tip?

                              MR. WHITE
                 I don't tip because society says I
                 gotta.  I tip when somebody
                 deserves a tip.  When somebody
                 really puts forth an effort, they
                 deserve a little something extra.
                 But this tipping automatically,
                 that shit's for the birds.  As far
                 as I'm concerned, they're just
                 doin their job.

                              MR. BLUE
                 Our girl was nice.

                              MR. WHITE
                 Our girl was okay.  She didn't do
                 anything special.

                              MR. BLONDE
                 What's something special, take ya
                 in the kitchen and suck your dick?

       They all laugh.

                              NICE GUY EDDIE
                 I'd go over twelve percent for
                 that.

                              MR. WRITE
                 Look, I ordered coffee.  Now we've
                 been here a long fuckin time, and
                 she's only filled my cup three
                 times.  When I order coffee,  I
                 want it filled six times.

                              MR. BLONDE
                 What if she's too busy?

                              MR. WHITE
                 The words "too busy" shouldn't be
                 in a waitress's vocabulary.

                              NICE GUY EDDIE
                 Excuse me, Mr. White, but the last
                 thing you need is another cup of
                 coffee.

       They all laugh.

                              MR. WHITE
                 These ladies aren't starvin to
                 death.  They make minimum wage.
                 When I worked for minimum wage, I
                 wasn't lucky enough to have a job
                 that society deemed tipworthy.

                              NICE GUY EDDIE
                 Ahh, now we're getting down to it.
                 It's not just that he's a cheap
                 bastard--

                              MR. ORANGE
                 --It is that too--

                              NICE GUY EDDIE
                 --It is that too.  But it's also
                 he couldn't get a waiter job.  You
                 talk like a pissed off dishwasher:
                 "Fuck those cunts and their
                 fucking tips."

                              MR. BLONDE
                 So you don't care that they're
                 counting on your tip to live?

       Mr. White rubs two of his fingers together.

                              MR. WHITE
                 Do you know what this is?  It's
                 the world's smallest violin,
                 playing just for the waitresses.

                              MR. BLONDE
                 You don't have any idea what
                 you're talking about.  These
                 people bust their ass. This
                 is a hard job.

                              MR. WHITE
                 So's working at McDonald's, but
                 you don't feel the need to tip
                 them.  They're servin ya food, you
                 should tip em.  But no, society
                 says tip these guys over here, but
                 not those guys over there.  That's
                 bullshit.

                              MR. ORANGE
                 They work harder than the kids at
                 McDonald's.

                              MR. WHITE
                 Oh yeah, I don't see them cleaning
                 fryers.

                              MR. BROWN
                 These people are taxed on the tips
                 they make.  When you stiff 'em,
                 you cost them money.

                              MR. BLONDE
                 Waitressing is the number one
                 occupation for female non-college
                 graduates in this country.  It's
                 the one jab basically any woman
                 can get, and make a living on.
                 The reason is because of tips.

                              MR. WHITE
                 Fuck all that.

       They all laugh.

                              MR. WHITE
                 Hey, I'm very sorry that the
                 government taxes their tips.
                 That's fucked up.  But that ain't
                 my fault.  it would appear that
                 waitresses are just one of the
                 many groups the government fucks
                 in the ass on a regular basis.
                 You show me a paper says the
                 government shouldn't do that, I'll
                 sign it.  Put it to a vote, I'll
                 vote for it.  But what I won't do
                 is play ball.  And this non-
                 college bullshit you're telling
                 me, I got two words for that:
                 "Learn to fuckin type."  Cause if
                 you're expecting me to help out
                 with the rent, you're in for a big
                 fuckin surprise.

                              MR. ORANGE
                 He's convinced me.  Give me my
                 dollar back.

       Everybody laughs.  Joe's comes back to the table.

                              JOE
                 Okay ramblers, let's get to
                 rambling.  Wait a minute, who
                 didn't throw in?

                              MR. ORANGE
                 Mr. White.

                              JOE
                         (to Mr. Orange)
                 Mr. White?
                         (to Mr. White)
                 Why?

                              MR. ORANGE
                 He don't tip.

                              JOE
                         (to Mr. Orange)
                 He don't tip?
                         (to Mr. White)
                 You don't tip?  Why?

                              MR. ORANGE
                 He don't believe in it.

                              JOE
                         (to Mr. Orange)
                 He don't believe in it?
                         (to Mr. White)
                 You don't believe in it?

                              MR. ORANGE
                 Nope.

                              JOE
                         (to Mr. Orange)
                 Shut up!
                         (to Mr. White)
                 Cough up the buck, ya cheap
                 bastard, I paid for your goddamn
                 breakfast.

                              MR. WHITE
                 Because you paid for the
                 breakfast, I'm gonna tip.
                 Normally I wouldn't.

                              JOE
                 Whatever.  Just throw in your
                 dollar, and let's move.
                         (to Mr. Blonde)
                 See what I'm dealing with here.
                 Infants.  I'm fuckin dealin with
                 infants.

       The eight men get up to leave.  Mr. White's waist is in
       the F.G.  As he buttons his coat, for a second we see he's
       carrying a gun.  They exit Uncle Bob's Pancake House,
       talking amongst themselves.


2      EXT. UNCLE BOB'S PANCAKE HOUSE - DAY

       CREDIT SEQUENCE:

       When the credit sequence is finished, we    FADE TO BLACK:

       Over the BLACK we hear the sound of SOMEONE SCREAMING in
       agony.

       Under the screaming, we hear the sound of a car HAULING
       ASS, through traffic.

       Over the screams and the traffic noise, we hear SOMEBODY
       ELSE SAY:

                              SOMEBODY ELSE (OS)
                 Just hold on buddy boy.

       Somebody stops screaming long enough to say:

                            SOMEBODY (OS)
                 I'm sorry.  I can't believe
                 she killed me.  Who would've
                 fuckin thought that?


TRAINSPOTTING
Trainspotting

                                Screenplay by

                                 John Hodge

                            Based on the Novel by

                                Irvine Welsh

                                 Directed by

                                 Danny Boyle

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EXT. STREET. DAY

Legs run along the pavement. They are Mark Renton's.

Just ahead of him is Spud. They are both belting along.

As they travel, various objects (pens, tapes, CDs, toiletries, ties,
sunglasses, etc.) either fall or are discarded from inside their jackets.

They are pursued by two hard-looking Store Detectives in identical uniforms.
The men are fast, but Renton and Spud maintain their lead.

                                   RENTON
                                (voice-over)

     Choose life. Choose a job. Choose a career. Choose a family,
     Choose a fucking big television, Choose washing machines, cars,
     compact disc players, and electrical tin openers.

Suddenly, as Renton crosses a road, a car skids to a halt, inches from him.

In a moment of detachment he stops and looks at the shocked driver, then at
Spud, who has continued running, then at the Two Men, who are now closing in
on him.

He smiles.

INT. SWANNEY'S FLAT ROOM. DAY

In a bare, dingy room, Renton lies on the floor, alone, motionless and
drugged.

                                   RENTON
                                    (v.o)

     Choose good health, low cholesterol and dental insurance. Choose
     fixed-interest mortgage repayments. Choose a starter home. Choose
     your friends.

EXT. FOOTBALL PITCH. NIGHT

On a flood lit five-a-side pitch, Renton and his friends are taking on
another team at football.

The opposition all wear an identical strip (Arsenal), whereas Renton and his
friends wear an odd assortment of gear.

Three girls -- Lizzy, Gail, and Allison and Baby -- stand by the side,
watching.

The boys are outclassed by the team with the strip but play much dirtier.

As each performs a characteristic bit of play, the play freezes and their
name is visible, printed or written on some item of clothing. (T-Shirt,
baseball cap, shorts, trainers). In Begbie's case, his name appears as a
tatoo on his arm.

Sick Boy commits a sneaky foul and indignantly denies it.

Begbie commits an obvious foul and make no effort to deny it.

Spud, in goal, lets the ball in between his legs.

Tommy kicks the ball as hard as he can.

Renton's litany continues over the action:

                                   RENTON
                                    (v.o)

     Choose leisure wear and matching luggage. Choose a three piece
     suite on hire purchase in a range of fucking fabrics. Choose DIY
     and wondering who you are on a Sunday morning. Choose sitting on
     that couch watching mind-numbing sprit-crushing game shows,
     stuffing fucking junk food into your mouth. Choose rotting away at
     the end of it all, pishing you last in a miserable home, nothing
     more than an embarrassment to the selfish, fucked-up brats you
     have spawned to replace yourself. Choose your future. Choose life.

Renton is hit straight in the face by the ball. He lies back on the
astroturf. Voice-over continues.

     But who would I want to do a thing like that?


INCEPTION
INCEPTION

     

                        Written by

                     Christopher Nolan




                                            SHOOTING SCRIPT
  FADE IN:

  DAWN. CRASHING SURF.

  The waves TOSS a BEARDED MAN onto wet sand. He lies there.

  A CHILD'S SHOUT makes him LIFT his head to see: a LITTLE
  BLONDE BOY crouching, back towards us, watching the tide eat
  a SANDCASTLE. A LITTLE BLONDE GIRL joins the boy. The Bearded
  Man tries to call them, but they RUN OFF, FACES UNSEEN. He
  COLLAPSES.

  The barrel of a rifle ROLLS the Bearded Man onto his back. A
  JAPANESE SECURITY GUARD looks down at him, then calls up the
  beach to a colleague leaning against a JEEP. Behind them is a
  cliff, and on top of that, a JAPANESE CASTLE.

  INT. ELEGANT DINING ROOM, JAPANESE CASTLE - LATER

  The Security Guard waits as an ATTENDANT speaks to an ELDERLY
  JAPANESE MAN sitting at the dining table, back to us.

                     ATTENDANT
               (in Japanese)
           He was delirious. But he asked for
           you by name. And...
               (to the Security Guard)
           Show him.

                     SECURITY GUARD
               (in Japanese)
           He was carrying nothing but this...

  He puts a HANDGUN on the table. The Elderly Man keeps eating.

                     SECURITY GUARD
           ...and this.

  The Security Guard places a SMALL PEWTER CONE alongside the
  gun. The Elderly Man STOPS eating. Picks up the cone.

                     ELDERLY JAPANESE MAN
               (in Japanese)
           Bring him here. And some food.

  INT. SAME - MOMENTS LATER

  The Elderly Man watches the Bearded Man WOLF down his food.
  He SLIDES the handgun down the table towards him.

                     ELDERLY JAPANESE MAN
               (in English)
           Are you here to kill me?

  The Bearded Man glances up at him, then back to his food.
                                                          2.

  The Elderly Japanese Man picks up the cone between thumb and
  forefinger.

                    ELDERLY JAPANESE MAN
          I know what this is.

  He SPINS it onto a table- it CIRCLES gracefully across the
  polished ebony... a SPINNING TOP.

                    ELDERLY JAPANESE MAN
          I've seen one before. Many, many
          years ago...

  The Elderly Japanese Man STARES at the top mesmerized.

                    ELDERLY JAPANESE MAN
          It belonged to a man I met in a
          half-remembered dream...

  MOVE IN on the GRACEFULLY SPINNING TOP...

                     ELDERLY JAPANESE MAN
          A man possessed of some radical
          notions...

The Elderly Japanese Man STARES, remembering...

                    COBB (V.O.)
          What's the most resilient parasite?

                                                    CUT TO:

INT. SAME ELEGANT DINING ROOM - NIGHT (YEARS EARLIER)

The speaker, COBB, is 35, handsome, tailored. A young
Japanese man, SAITO, eats as he listens.

                    COBB
          A bacteria? A virus?

Cobb gestures at their feast with his wine glass-

                    COBB
          An intestinal worm?

Saito's fork pauses, mid-air. Cobb GRINS. A third man is at
the table- ARTHUR. He jumps in to save the pitch-

                    ARTHUR
          What Mr. Cobb is trying to say-

                     COBB
          An idea.

Saito looks at Cobb, curious.
                                                3.

                    COBB
          Resilient, highly contagious. Once
          an idea's taken hold in the brain
          it's almost impossible to
          eradicate. A person can cover it
          up, ignore it- but it stays there.

                    SAITO
          But surely-to forget...?

                    COBB
          Information, yes. But an idea?
          Fully formed, understood? That
          sticks...
              (taps forehead)
          In there, somewhere.

                    SAITO
          For someone like you to steal?

                    ARTHUR
          Yes. In the dream state, conscious
          defenses are lowered and your
          thoughts become vulnerable to
          theft. It's called extraction.

                    COBB
          But, Mr. Saito, we can train your
          subconscious to defend itself from
          even the most skilled extractor.

                    SAITO
          How can you do that?

                    COBB
          Because I am the most skilled
          extractor. I know how to search
          your mind and find your secrets. I
          know the tricks, and I can teach
          them to your subconscious so that
          even when you're asleep, your guard
          is never down.

Cobb leans forwards. Holding Saito's gaze.

                    COBB
          But if I'm going to help you, you
          have to be completely open to me.
          I'll need to know my way around
          your thoughts better than your
          wife, your analyst, anyone.
              (gestures around)
          If this is a dream and you've got a
          safe full of secrets, I need to
          know what's in that safe. For this
          to work, you have to let me in.
                                                            4.

Saito gives this a flicker of a smile. Rises. A BODYGUARD
opens double doors which give onto a LAVISH PARTY.

                    SAITO
          Gentlemen. Enjoy your evening as I
          consider your proposal.

They watch Saito leave. Arthur turns to Cobb, worried-

                      ARTHUR
          He knows.

Cobb motions silence. A TREMOR starts, they steady their
glasses, Cobb glances at his watch- THE SECOND HAND IS
FROZEN.

                    ARTHUR
          What's going on up there?

And we-

                                                    CUT TO:

FILTHY BATHROOM - DAY (FEELS LIKE DIFFERENT TIME)

Cobb, ASLEEP, SITTING IN A CHAIR AT THE END OF A STEAMING
BATH. The chair is up on a cabinet- the bottom of the legs
level with the rim of the tub.

A sweating man (40's) watches over Cobb. This is NASH. A
distant EXPLOSION rumbles through the room. Nash moves to the
window, parts the curtains. Outside: a CHAOTIC DEVELOPING-WORLD
CITY- the street filled with RIOTERS- SMASHING, BURNING.

Nash checks Cobb's left wrist: above his watch, tape holds
TWO THIN YELLOW TUBES in place. Nash looks at Cobb's watch-
THE SECOND HAND CRAWLS UNNATURALLY SLOWLY.

Nash follows the tubes to a SILVER BRIEFCASE at Arthur's
feet: ARTHUR IS ASLEEP in an armchair. Tubes connect the
briefcase to Arthur's wrist.

Nash follows another set of tubes from the briefcase to where
they pass under the door to the bedroom. Through the crack of
the door, Nash sees SAITO ASLEEP on the bed, tubes running to
his wrist. BOOM- a closer EXPLOSION, and we-

                                                    CUT TO:

INT. BULLET TRAIN COMPARTMENT - DAY (FEELS LIKE DIFFERENT TIME)

Nash, ASLEEP. Head ROCKING AGAINST THE WINDOW as the train
BUMPS OVER A ROUGH PIECE OF TRACK.
                                                           5.

A Japanese Man, TODASHI (18) watches Nash nervously. He
checks Nash's wrist: TWO YELLOW TUBES CONNECT NASH WITH THREE
OTHER SLEEPING MEN IN THE COMPARTMENT: COBB, ARTHUR, SAITO.

Todashi checks his watch: THE SECOND HAND TICKS IN REAL TIME.
Another TRAIN PASSES in the opposite direction with a MIGHTY
WHUMP- Todashi's eyes FLY to Nash's sleeping face-

NASH JERKS WITH THE MOVEMENT OF THE TRAIN, and we-

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INT. FILTHY BATHROOM - CONTINUOUS

Another EXPLOSION- Nash CHECKS the sleeping Cobb and we-

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EXT. ROOFTOP TERRACES, JAPANESE CASTLE - NIGHT

A LOW TREMOR RUMBLES THROUGH THE CASTLE. Cobb and Arthur
steady themselves against the wooden rail. Several TILES and
pieces of MASONRY fall. Below them a BLACK SEA churns. Other
GUESTS wander the massive terraces.

                    ARTHUR
          Saito knows. He's playing with us.

                    COBB
          I can get it here. The
          information's in the safe- he
          looked right at it when I mentioned
          secrets.

Arthur nods. Then spots someone over Cobb's shoulder.

                    ARTHUR
          What's she doing here, Cobb?

Cobb turns to see a beautiful woman, elegantly dressed,
staring out at the sea. This is MAL. Cobb watches her.

                    COBB
          You just get to your room. I'll
          take care of the rest.

                    ARTHUR
          See that you do. We're here to
          work.

Arthur brushes past Mal, shaking his head. She nears Cobb.
Looks out at the DROP. The WIND WHIPS HER HAIR-

                    MAL
          If I jumped, would I survive?
                                                           6.

                    COBB
          With a clean dive, perhaps. Mal,
          why are you here?

She turns to look at him. Amused.

                    MAL
          I thought you might be missing
          me...

She smiles. He leans in, mesmerized.

                    COBB
          I am. But I can't trust you
          anymore.

She stares up at him, inviting.

                       MAL
          So what?



  FIGHT CLUB

Jack brings the gun up, PUTS THE GUN IN HIS MOUTH.

     Tyler cocks his head.

                             TYLER
                 What are you doing?

                             JACK
                 What have you left for me?

                             TYLER
                 Why do you want to do that? Why do
                 you want to put that gun in your
                 mouth?

                             JACK
                 Not my mouth.  Our mouth.

     Tyler is calm.

                             TYLER
                 This is interesting.

     Tyler smiles in appreciation, slowly walks forward, stands
     very close to Jack.

                             TYLER
                 Why are you going with this, Ikea-
                 boy?

                             JACK
                 It's the only way to get rid of you...

     Jack COCKS the hammer on the gun.

                             TYLER
                 I can see you feel very strongly.  I
                 feel strongly too.
                       (pause)
                 Hey, you and me.
                       (pause)
                 Friends again?

     Their eyes are locked, unblinking.  Long silence.

                             JACK
                 Do something for me.

                             TYLER
                 What?

                             JACK
                 Appreciate something.

                             TYLER
                 What?

                             JACK
                 Look at me...

                             TYLER
                 What?

                             JACK
                 My eyes are open.

     EXTREME SLOW MOTION:

     Jack's finger squeezes the trigger...

     KABLAM! -- Jack's cheeks INFLATE with gas.  His eyes bulge.
     BLOOD flies out from his head.  The WINDOW behind him
     SHATTERS.  SMOKE wafts out of his mouth and tear ducts.

     RESUME NORMAL SPEED as the GLASS FALLS behind Jack...

     Tyler stands, in gunsmoke, eyes glazed, sniffs the air...

                             TYLER
                 What's that smell... ?

     Jack slumps to the floor... Tyler falls...

     Tyler hits the ground.  The back of TYLER'S HEAD is BLOWN
     OPEN, revealing blood, skull and brain.

     Suddenly, a GROUP of SPACE MONKEYS burst into the room,
     moving forward to Jack.  TYLER'S BODY IS GONE.

                             TALL SPACE MONKEY
                 Are you all right, sir... ?!

     Jack quakes, holding the side of his head; a ragged hole
     blown in his CHEEK.  He's bleeding hard, but he's alive.

                             JACK
                 I'm okay...

     Jack looks to the Space Monkeys, trying to get his eyes to
     see.  TWO SPACE MONKEYS enter with Marla.  One holds a gun
     to Marla as she struggles.

                             SHORT SPACE MONKEY
                 Are you sure?  You look terrible,
                 sir!  What's happened?

                             JACK
                 Everything's fine.

                             ANOTHER SPACE MONKEY
                 Sir, you look really awful!  Do you
                 need medical assistance?

     Jack sees Marla, tries to get to his feet, falls...

                             JACK
                 Bring the girl to me.  The rest of
                 you get out.  Now!

     The Monkeys bring Marla, releasing her, saluting.

                             MARLA
                 What happened... ?

                             JACK
                 Don't ask.

     Marla crouches, takes out wadded TISSUES and tries to apply.
     them to Jack's wound.  Space Monkeys are leaving, hesitantly.

                             JACK
                 Get to the rendezvous point.  Move it!

     Jack and Marla are left alone.

                             MARLA
                 My God, you're shot...

                             JACK
                 Yes.

     Jack tries to got up.  Marla helps him.

                             MARLA
                 Who did this to you?

                             JACK
                 I did, I think.  But, I'm okay... I'm
                 fine...

     MASSIVE EXPLOSION... the glass walls rattle...

     Jack and Marla look -- OUT THE WINDOWS: a BUILDING EXPLODES;
     collapsing upon itself.  Then, ANOTHER BUILDING IMPLODES
     into a massive cloud of dust.  Jack and Marla are
     silhouetted against the SKYLINE.  Jack looks to Marla,
     reaches to take her hand.

                             JACK
                 I'm sorry... you met me at a very
                 strange time in my life.

     Marla looks at him.  ANOTHER BUILDING IMPLODES and COLLAPSES
     inward... and ANOTHER BUILDING... and ANOTHER...

     The FILM SLOWS, then ADVANCES ONE FRAME at a TIME -- SHOWING
     SPROCKET HOLES on the SIDES.  EACH FRAME is an IMPLODING
     BUILDING -- then, ONE FRAME IS A PENIS.  Then, the IMPLODING
     BUILDING again.  SPEED UP the frames, LOSE the sprocket
     holes, RESUME NORMAL SPEED...

                                                     FADE TO BLACK:

                                                end






CITIZEN KANE

Citizen Kane

                                        By

                              Herman J. Mankiewicz

                                        &

                                   Orson Welles
         
         

                                     PROLOGUE

          FADE IN:

          EXT. XANADU - FAINT DAWN - 1940 (MINIATURE)

          Window, very small in the distance, illuminated.

          All around this is an almost totally black screen.  Now, as
          the camera moves slowly towards the window which is almost a
          postage stamp in the frame, other forms appear; barbed wire,
          cyclone fencing, and now, looming up against an early morning
          sky, enormous iron grille work.  Camera travels up what is now
          shown to be a gateway of gigantic proportions and holds on the
          top of it - a huge initial "K" showing darker and darker against
          the dawn sky.  Through this and beyond we see the fairy-tale
          mountaintop of Xanadu, the great castle a sillhouette as its
          summit, the little window a distant accent in the darkness.

                                   

                                                                  DISSOLVE:

          A SERIES OF SET -UPS, EACH CLOSER TO THE GREAT WINDOW, ALL
          TELLING SOMETHING OF:

          The literally incredible domain of CHARLES FOSTER KANE.

          Its right flank resting for nearly forty miles on the Gulf
          Coast, it truly extends in all directions farther than the eye
          can see.  Designed by nature to be almost completely bare and
          flat - it was, as will develop, practically all marshland when
          Kane acquired and changed its face - it is now pleasantly
          uneven, with its fair share of rolling hills and one very good-
          sized mountain, all man-made.  Almost all the land is improved,
          either through cultivation for farming purposes of through
          careful landscaping, in the shape of parks and lakes.  The
          castle dominates itself, an enormous pile, compounded of several
          genuine castles, of European origin, of varying architecture -
          dominates the scene, from the very peak of the mountain.

                                                                  DISSOLVE:

          GOLF LINKS (MINIATURE)

          Past which we move.  The greens are straggly and overgrown,
          the fairways wild with tropical weeds, the links unused and
          not seriously tended for a long time.

                                                              DISSOLVE OUT:

                                                               DISSOLVE IN:

          WHAT WAS ONCE A GOOD-SIZED ZOO (MINIATURE)

          Of the Hagenbeck type.  All that now remains, with one
          exception, are the individual plots, surrounded by moats, on
          which the animals are kept, free and yet safe from each other
          and the landscape at large.  (Signs on several of the plots
          indicate that here there were once tigers, lions, girrafes.)

                                                                  DISSOLVE:

          THE MONKEY TERRACE (MINIATURE)

          In the foreground, a great obscene ape is outlined against the
          dawn murk.  He is scratching himself slowly, thoughtfully,
          looking out across the estates of Charles Foster Kane, to the
          distant light glowing in the castle on the hill.

                                                                  DISSOLVE:

          THE ALLIGATOR PIT (MINIATURE)

          The idiot pile of sleepy dragons.  Reflected in the muddy water -
          the lighted window.

          THE LAGOON (MINIATURE)

          The boat landing sags.  An old newspaper floats on the surface
          of the water - a copy of the New York Enquirer."  As it moves
          across the frame, it discloses again the reflection of the
          window in the castle, closer than before.

          THE GREAT SWIMMING POOL (MINIATURE)

          It is empty.  A newspaper blows across the cracked floor of
          the tank.

                                                                  DISSOLVE:

          THE COTTAGES (MINIATURE)

          In the shadows, literally the shadows, of the castle.  As we
          move by, we see that their doors and windows are boarded up
          and locked, with heavy bars as further protection and sealing.

                                                              DISSOLVE OUT:

                                                               DISSOLVE IN:

          A DRAWBRIDGE (MINIATURE)

          Over a wide moat, now stagnant and choked with weeds.  We move
          across it and through a huge solid gateway into a formal garden,
          perhaps thirty yards wide and one hundred yards deep, which
          extends right up to the very wall of the castle.  The
          landscaping surrounding it has been sloppy and causal for a
          long time, but this particular garden has been kept up in
          perfect shape.  As the camera makes its way through it, towards
          the lighted window of the castle, there are revealed rare and
          exotic blooms of all kinds.  The dominating note is one of
          almost exaggerated tropical lushness, hanging limp and
          despairing.  Moss, moss, moss.  Ankor Wat, the night the last
          King died.

                                                                  DISSOLVE:

          THE WINDOW (MINIATURE)

          Camera moves in until the frame of the window fills the frame
          of the screen.  Suddenly, the light within goes out.  This
          stops the action of the camera and cuts the music which has
          been accompanying the sequence.  In the glass panes of the
          window, we see reflected the ripe, dreary landscape of Mr.
          Kane's estate behind and the dawn sky.

                                                                  DISSOLVE:

          INT. KANE'S BEDROOM - FAINT DAWN -

          A very long shot of Kane's enormous bed, silhouetted against
          the enormous window.

                                                                  DISSOLVE:

          INT. KANE'S BEDROOM - FAINT DAWN - SNOW SCENE.

          An incredible one.  Big, impossible flakes of snow, a too
          picturesque farmhouse and a snow man.  The jingling of sleigh
          bells in the musical score now makes an ironic reference to
          Indian Temple bells - the music freezes -

         

                                    KANE'S OLD OLD VOICE
                        Rosebud...

          The camera pulls back, showing the whole scene to be contained
          in one of those glass balls which are sold in novelty stores
          all over the world.  A hand - Kane's hand, which has been
          holding the ball, relaxes.  The ball falls out of his hand and
          bounds down two carpeted steps leading to the bed, the camera
          following.  The ball falls off the last step onto the marble
          floor where it breaks, the fragments glittering in the first
          rays of the morning sun.  This ray cuts an angular pattern
          across the floor, suddenly crossed with a thousand bars of
          light as the blinds are pulled across the window.

          The foot of Kane's bed.  The camera very close.  Outlined
          against the shuttered window, we can see a form - the form of
          a nurse, as she pulls the sheet up over his head.  The camera
          follows this action up the length of the bed and arrives at
          the face after the sheet has covered it.


                                                                  FADE OUT:

 

 GRAVITY

Mission Control interrupts on the radio.
                       
                          MISSION CONTROL
                          (ON RADIO)
           ISS, this is Houston.
                       
           SPACE STATION CAP
                          (ON RADIO)
           Zlotze Houston.
                       
          Ryan inserts the plate into the Hubble.
                       
                          MISSION CONTROL
                          (ON RADIO)
           Explorer, this is Houston.
                       
                          EXPLORER CAP
                          (ON RADIO)
           Go ahead Houston.
                       
                          MISSION CONTROL
                          (ON RADIO)
           Mission abort. Repeat: mission abort.
           Initiate emergency disconnect from
           Hubble.
                       
          All the astronauts stop what they're doing and anxiously await
          further instructions, except for Ryan who keeps working.
                       
           MISSION CONTROL (CONT'D)
                          (ON RADIO)
           Begin re-entry procedure. Start
           Deorbit Prep for PLS at Kennedy. ISS,
           initiate emergency evacuation.
                       
          Matt is immediately flung into action and rapidly unharnesses
          himself from the Hubble.
                       
                          EXPLORER CAP
                          (ON RADIO)
           Copy all Houston, and in work.
           Matt, immediate return to Explorer.
           Repeat, immediate return to Explorer.
                       
                          MATT
           Roger. Explorer, prep airlock!
                          EXPLORER CAP
                          (ON RADIO)
           Airlock engaged--ready to receive.
                       
          Ryan is working on the panel.
                       
                          MATT
           Houston. Elaborate.
                       
                       
                       
                          MISSION CONTROL
                          (ON RADIO)
           Debris from the impact has caused a
           chain reaction, hitting other
           satellites in its path and creating
           new debris. Norad reports that orbital
           and ballistic effects are driving the
           cloud of debris up toward your
           altitude. How copy?
                       
                          MATT
           Copy all Houston.
                          (TO RYAN)
           Put a bow on it Dr. Stone.
                       
                          RYAN
           I can't. If I turn it off now we'll
           lose the whole system.
                       
          She keeps on furiously tweaking.
                       
                          MATT
           I'm not going to ask you again.
                       
                          RYAN
                          ONE SECOND--
                       
                          MATT
           Not one second. Now! Shut it down!
           THAT'S AN ORDER!!!
                       
          She looks up, sees Matt glaring. Looks him in the eye.
                       
                          RYAN
           Sorry. I'm sorry. It's done.
                       
          The ROBOTIC ARM slowly withdraws, carrying Ryan back towards the
          Shuttle.
                       
          Matt watches her go, then:
                          EXPLORER CAP
                          (ON RADIO)
           Kowalsky, initiate emergency
           disconnect from the Hubble.
                       
                          MATT
           Alright Shariff, let's do this.
                       
                          SHARIFF
           Roger.
                       
          Shariff turns and heads toward the base of the telescope holding
          onto the hangar's handrails.
                       
                          MATT
           Houston. Update.
                       
          Matt PROPELS himself to the base of the Hubble using the
          propelling unit on his back.
                       
                          MISSION CONTROL
           We have a full on chain reaction. It's
           been confirmed that it is the
           unintentional side effect of the
           Russians striking one of their own
           satellites.
                       
          Shariff arrives to the base of the telescope.
                       
                          SHARIFF
           They shot down their own satellite?
                       
                          MATT
           Right of disposal. Most likely a spy
           sat gone bad. Now it's space junk.
                       
          Matt grabs onto the base of the telescope-
                       
                          MATT (CONT'D)
           Explorer, ready to disengage HST.
                       
                          EXPLORER CAP
                          (ON RADIO)
           Locks releasing in three... two...
           one...
                       
          The locks attaching the Hubble to the Explorer release. Matt and
          Shariff give the Hubble a push away from the hangar. Pushing the
          huge telescope is not a difficult task in zero gravity.
                       
                          MISSION CONTROL
           Explorer, new data coming through.
                       
          As it floats away, Matt gives the telescope a small spin.
                          MATT
           What's the blowback, Houston?
                       
                          MISSION CONTROL
           It's not good. Most of our systems are
           going down. Debris chain reaction is
           out of control and rapidly expanding.
           Multiple sats are now down and they
           keep on falling.
                       
          Matt eyes the arm as it slowly retracts, carrying Ryan back.
                       
                          MATT
           Define "multiple" sats.
                       
                          MISSION CONTROL
           Most of them. Telecomunications
           systems are gone. Expect a
           communication blackout at any moment.
                       
                          RYAN
           Kowalsky, visual of debris at nine
           o'clock.
                       
          Matt's eyes shift, watching a LARGE OBJECT, a piece of a BSE
          SATELLITE, spiral toward them.
                       
                          MATT
           Half of North America just lost their
           Facebook.
                       
          The sat glides by at tremendous speed.
                       
                          MISSION CONTROL
           You're a go for TH1138. Repeat You're
           a go for TH1138 procedure.
                       
                          EXPLORER CAP
           Copy that Houston.
                       
                          MATT
           Explorer, this is Kowalsky. Confirming
           visual contact with debris. Debris is
           from a BSE sat. To repeat--
                       
                          SHARIFF
           Heads up!
                       
                          MATT
           To repeat I have-
                       
          ANOTHER OBJECT, part of a WEATHER SATELLITE, hurls by them, a
          little bit closer than the previous one.
                          RYAN
           Dr. Stone requesting faster, faster
           transport.
                       
          It is followed by a SMALL PIECE OF DEBRIS. It zooms by faster
          than the previous ones and hits the BSE SATELLITE.
                       
          The satellite EXPLODES into hundreds of pieces and-
                       
          A CHAIN REACTION takes place.
                       
                          MATT
           We have to go. Go, go! Go!
                       
          The DEBRIS from the BSE satellite hits the WEATHER SATELLITE,
          and it EXPLODES, sending debris in all directions.
                       
                          MISSION CONTROL
           Attention. New data suggests immediate
           evacuation absolu...
                       
          A high frequency of interference and-
                       
          THE COMMUNICATION IS LOST.
                       
          THE ARM transporting Ryan is moving very slowly.
                       
                          RYAN
           Dr. Stone requesting faster transport
           to the bay area. Explorer get me down.
                       
                          MATT
           Explorer permission to retrieve Dr.
           Stone.
                       
                          EXPLORER CAP
                          (ON RADIO)
           You are a go, Kowalsky.
                       
          Matt thrusts himself over to Ryan.
                       
           EXPLORER CAP (CONT'D)
                          (ON RADIO)
           Houston, this is Explorer. Copy?
                       
          But there's no answer.
                       
           EXPLORER CAP (CONT'D)
                          (ON RADIO)
           Houston, this is Explorer. Copy?
                       
          Still no answer.
           EXPLORER CAP (CONT'D)
                          (ON RADIO)
           We lost Houston!
                       
          Matt stops next to Ryan.
                       
                          MATT
           Unstrap! You can't tune out the world
           up here.
                       
          She reaches for the last clip and begins to undo it.
                       
                          RYAN
           I'm trying...
                       
                          MATT
           Try releasing the safety clip.
                       
          Shariff makes his way back toward the airlock as-
                       
          A PIECE of the debris HITS the Hubble's SOLAR PANELS, making a
          12-inch HOLE in its golden surface.
                       
          A piece of debris passes, nearly hitting them.
                       
                          SHARIFF
           Need some help there Matt?
                       
                          MATT
           No, don't wait for us. Get inside.
                       
                          RYAN
           It's stuck!
                       
          Further back, another piece of debris collides with a bigger
          one. The two chunks of debris explode into a million pieces of
          shrapnel, one of which-
                       
          HITS Shariff's helmet, breaking through the glass and hitting
          his head like an expansive bullet.
                       
                          MATT
           Man down! Man down!
                       
          Matt PROPELS himself toward Shariff, who is floating away from
          the Shuttle unconscious.
                       
                          MATT (CONT'D)
                          (TO RYAN)
           Disengage!!!
                       
          AN IMPACT.
          A piece of debris pierces through the right wing of the Space
          Shuttle, creating a five-foot hole.
                       
          THE SPACE SHUTTLE ROLLS.
                       
          The arm, with Ryan attached to it, rolls with the Shuttle.
                       
                          MATT (CONT'D)
           Explorer has been hit. Explorer do you
           read? Explorer, over. Explorer--
                       
          Another IMPACT.
                       
          A piece of debris HITS the robotic arm like a cannon ball and
          DETACHES it from the Shuttle.
                       
          The broken piece of the arm SPINS AWAY from the Explorer at a
          great speed with Ryan attached to it. She passes next to-
                       
          THE HUBBLE as a big piece of debris hits the telescope. The top
          of the cylinder explodes into more debris, which is expelled in
          all directions, barely missing Ryan as she spins away attached
          to the arm.
                       
          ON THE ARM-
                       
          Ryan's panic grows as she spins further into the nothingness of
          space.
                       
                          MATT (CONT'D)
           Astronaut off structure! Dr. Stone is
           off structure!
                       
          With every spin, the shuttle, being punished by debris,
          diminishes into a tiny dot in the distance.
                       
                          MATT (CONT'D)
                          (ON RADIO)
           Dr. Stone, detach!
                       
                          RYAN
           Nooooo!
                       
                          MATT
                          (ON RADIO)
           You must detach!
                       
                          RYAN
           No.
                       
                          MATT
           If you don't detach that arm is going
           to carry you too far!
                          RYAN
                          (FROZEN)
           I can't!
                       
                          MATT
           (a brief beat, then)
           Listen to my voice. You need to focus.
           I'm losing visual of you. In a few
           seconds I won't be able to track you.
                       
                          RYAN
           (She pulls herself together)
           Ok. Ok.
                       
                          MATT
           You need to detach. I can't see you
           anymore.
                       
          The robotic arm keeps on spinning and stars orbit wildly in her
          field of vision.
                       
                          RYAN
           I'm trying. I'm trying.
                       
                          MATT
           Do it. Now!
                       
                          RYAN
           Ok. I'm trying! I can't it's stuck,
           Hold on.
                       
          Ryan's hands are trembling and she can't get a grip on the hook.
                       
                          MATT
           Houston, I've lost visual of Dr.
           Stone... Houston, I've lost visual of
           Dr. Stone.
                       
          As Matt's VOICE is LOST to STATIC, Ryan squeezes the hook and
          is...
                       
          ...gone, kicking herself AWAY from the robotic arm and FLYING
          FREE of the rotating arm. She catches a brief glimpse of the arm
          as it helicopters away, then loses sight of it as she rotates
          end over end in endless free fall.

 

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